zimtastic

Please draw the TSA strip searching the US Constitution with the Reddit alien sneaking up behind with an axe.

I'd put a download of Wikipedia on it.

Your site says we need to match out ticket numbers each week. Is this something that happens automatically, or do we not win if we don't manually check the ticket numbers?

Also, is there a deposit/ticket maximum?

I watched the whole thing.

Cons: (nothing to do with the narration)

I think you need to re-work the ending. I think the beginning was much more edited and focused. Towards the end you just sort of let the people ramble on a bit. Some of the series of monologues at the end could be trimmed down.

Also, you invested a lot in the setup in the beginning on you, and how you were doing the experiment - however, you just end with "there you go" - c'mon, tell us what happened! The audience is learning about the plight of the homeless through your experiences, you need to close it properly!

Pros: Despite the technical issues and larger content issues toward the end, I thought it was really good. I hadn't really thought too much about the homeless, but I felt this really opened my eyes. Thank you!