tdzangel

I applaud your creativity and the pure enthusiasm with which you've self-published, but maybe try out a test audience beforehand next time.

I'm sure you feel the title is pertinent to the story, but I'll be honest, it really does not sound appealing. If your goal is a passion project that's just for you, then great, but if you are hoping to market to a wider audience, test reads and market appeal are very important

Did you have a specific audience in mind when writing this story?

Why the hell did you pick that as your title??

Just watched your film - and it's great! Is there any plans to create a sequel/series following the ascent of the young god, Ola?

Also, have you guys submitted this short to some film festivals?