salineDerringer

So I can look back on my life and know one thing: I made my bosses a lot of money, and I did it with pizzazz.

I would get rid of "tentatively", "bare", and either "oversized" or "massive" because they both accomplish the same goal [of making it seem like she lives in a mansion]. And maybe split up that third sentence somehow.

I'm not actually any good at writing, so take that with a grain of salt.