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If I can jerk you off for a bit, here, you're a master at this stuff. Sequencing verses to keep the reader engaged and to deliver a message more powerfully.
In Stick to Your Guns especially, setting the deep and personal verse before the two that try to show off just how impersonal the people who get the most traction by talking about these situations are is a phenominal juxtaposition. The difference between the suicide note in the first verse and the standard news broadcast in the second is what makes the song so goddamn beautiful and the message so goddamn powerful. IMO, I think it's your strongest piece of work. Solid 10/10.
jacobetes362 karma
Can you give me a brief explanation as to why it's better defensively? I'm not great at scrabble, but im always interested in high level game strategies.
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