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Xantoxu368 karma

It seems like you aren't too great with the whole English thing, so I went ahead and re-wrote your 'about' section. Take whatever you want from it. Also, I'm supposed to ask you a question so; why did you want to make this game, and not another game?

I bolded the parts I changed. I tried not changing much thematically, so it should still feel like what you wanted. Mouse over them to get a message that is what the line used to be. (I also removed periods from some of the lines that didn't need them. You don't need a period at the end of a list element. You can have one if you want, but what matters is consistency. I didn't bold the lines where that's all I did, though.)


Sword fight and free run with and against your friends in this team based online+couch arena brawler.

KEY FEATURES

So is it only fighting? Not really. Use your fighting skills in additional game modes like Treasure Hunt and Artifact.

Treasure Hunt mode

Quite straightforward. Coins are laying around the arena, and you need to get them to your base before the enemy team does. Or... hunt enemy players carrying those coins.

Artifact mode

Something new you’ve never experienced before. It goes like this:

Confused? Just try it out. It’s easy once you play it.

Xantoxu240 karma

"You're already impressed, so let's just get to it."

Xantoxu207 karma

Yea. I'm satisfied being a grower. When I don't have an erection, it's not all too noticeable.

Xantoxu58 karma

I'm sure it is, I'm trying to learn Japanese myself and it's incredibly difficult re-learning such a basic part of yourself. Glad to help.

That's pretty cool. You guys always been interested in brawlers, or was that a spur of the moment kinda thing?

Xantoxu47 karma

Today me, tomorrow you. That ol' saying from that one dude that did the thing for that guy that time.