TickTockTacky
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TickTockTacky14 karma
Let's try not violating their First Amendment rights by sending them to specifically religious rehab programs, to start. There's no reason to think "we must do it this way or no solution at all!11!"
TickTockTacky7 karma
I'm sorry about your mom. Even though it's been 3+ years that's tough.
What do you think about instead of pushing the former prisoner angle as hard, try mixing in advertising as all natural and non-toxic? Lifetime investments? Try r/buyitforlife and different fashion subreddits.
Also, what do you think about the way your write? I like everything about the ideas, it's just your writing ability is distracting and I'm sorry highlighting that. It's better on the Kickstarter but also there. What I'd recommend is:
Short paragraphs.
No unnecessary words.
Proofread with another person.
(and I feel bad saying these things, you're not here for revision, but it is all I really think about, and I'm sure it's influencing other people's opinion)
TickTockTacky82 karma
Do you expect to just end up with dentures one day? Also, do ordinary dentist techniques like drilling go wrong with OI?
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