Thought first then question: I agree with the review regarding the VO. You need better sound equipment and please don't do the falsetto voice when reading your definitions. That trivialized the story for me. It sounded like you were doing the narration over speakerphone.
What was your favorite moment while living in the streets? What was your least favorite?
Also unclear, did you live for a few months straight as homeless or did you go home and come back?
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Thought first then question: I agree with the review regarding the VO. You need better sound equipment and please don't do the falsetto voice when reading your definitions. That trivialized the story for me. It sounded like you were doing the narration over speakerphone.
What was your favorite moment while living in the streets? What was your least favorite?
Also unclear, did you live for a few months straight as homeless or did you go home and come back?
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