petersbro

The tone of that last part doesn't match the tone of the first part...

What do you have to say to readers who found your book overly disjointed?

Some people are serious. I had a relative drive into canyons in a blizzard, then she turned off the road and drove until she got stuck, then she overdosed on alcohol and xanax, then she got out of the car and walked in normal clothing as far as she could into the middle of nowhere. It took a while to locate the car and the body wasn't found until spring. I wonder what it looked like at that point... I'm sure the ME didn't have a fun time with it.

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